His Ways

By pkroutray

Mon, 19 Nov 2012
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His ways
P k Routray
To an ocean asked a man,
“Change your water if you can,
Your water is salty,
make it tasty,
you will be great,
as your salty water I hate.
To a cuckoo asked the man
“Change your color if you can
I do not like your color as all black
appealing to man’s taste it does lack.”
To a rose asked the man
“Remove your throns if you can
I do not like your thorn
it gives me pain to mourn.”
The man heard their voices in unison
“God has blessed us with those traits to save us from your greed of which He was very certain."

Certificate U
Singing in My Thoughts (Poetry)
Opinion

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
sixth line from the end, did you mean to write 'thorns' not 'thrones'? Also, I wondered if you really meant this to be Certificate 18, the box on the 'Write a Story' has changed to that if you don't change it, whereas it used to be 'U' universal if you didn't change it. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by pkroutray on
Thank you very much. it was unforced errors.