Mate of Mine
By PoeticalJustice
Fri, 10 Oct 2014
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If you're a mate of mine,
you can trust me with your life,
you don't need to hide things from me or lie.
If I don't like what I'm hearing,
it's ok, I'll survive,
but don't make it so to your actions, I am blind.
I will fight your corner,
I will lead your enemies like lambs to the slaughter,
but how am I suppose to fight your corner,
when you LIE and you can't even get your priorities in order?!
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I like it. Not sure about
I like it. Not sure about this line though -
'but how am I oughta fight your corner,' ? Might be just me, but it doesn't sound quite right yet.
Good thoughts in this.
Bee
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