School Days
By pom99
Fri, 19 Dec 2014
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His white shirt and gray pants push through the morning rain
The frayed straps of knowledge,
hanging loose on a 10 year old back.
A waiting father kindly urges him on
Juggles the bag and tests the weight.
Perhaps, to straddle the gap between conformity and comfort.
In the paddy fields
The white stork
flaps its snow white wings
Heavy,
with each wingbeat of responsibility
and takes flight.
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Wonderful imagery at work
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Wonderful imagery at work here. You sure do have a way with words. When I've more time, I shall read some more of your writing.
Tina
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