I'm Sorry,

By prettyrose

Tue, 10 Jul 2012

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4 comments

I could not stop your pain
That long drawn out harsh day
If only I could of.

It took every ounce of strength
I had left to leave you in that awful
over worked, unloved place, I
Could see your face as we approached
The tall black gates, built for
Prisoners they looked more suited for
Not kind, gentle people like
You Dad.

You held on to my hand so tight
A shiver so cold gave me a fright.
Although my heart broke that day
I knew it was the only way and at least
It was only going to be a short stay.
But for me my journey was yet to start
And it was made worse
With us being apart.

But I will fight this disease, I
Promise dad and come back stronger
Than ever and we will laugh again
Like we use to before this cruel
Painful twist of fate drained
Away our happy souls.

Certificate U

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Love

Comments

Lovely words PR. The last

Permalink Submitted by jolono on Tue, 2012-07-10 10:54

Lovely words PR. The last verse was beautiful.

Truly beautiful,

Permalink Submitted by Rigel on Tue, 2012-07-10 11:49

Truly beautiful, Prettyrose. Rigel

Aww Rigel, I hope your well

Permalink Submitted by prettyrose on Tue, 2012-07-10 20:58

Aww Rigel, I hope your well too:) thank you so much that means so much your comments and reading my poem. Like I said it made me shed a tear or two. Thank you again. keep writing keep smiling :))))

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Hi Jolono, I hope your well

Permalink Submitted by prettyrose on Tue, 2012-07-10 20:56

Hi Jolono, I hope your well as can be :) thank you so much for your lovely comments and taking the time to look at my work, I appreciate it. Yes I felt a tear or two doing this one, there's a personal attachment to this. I will possibly had more when up to it but let me know what you guys think. thanks again :) keep writing keep smiling :))