'Just Smile'!!

By prettyrose

Mon, 11 Jul 2011
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Don't shed a tear for me,
My Dear,Iv not gone away,
I'm still right here,
Just walking along,quietly.

I know you didn't mean to hurt me,
And always loved me silently,but
Now wished, we had shared so,
Much more, but don't worry,
I knew our love wasn't measured,
By the amount of grain used,
Only the quality it came in,
So no regrets, oh please,
Just feel lots of Repose!

We will always connect,like
Happy lighting in a storm,
Just not always when we like,
But when you feel sad,
Just turn around,
And Smile back at me.

So don't shed a tear no more,
For me my dear,
I'm just glad your OK,
So just let the rainbow shine,
Where the rivers cannot,not climb.

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Comments

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new prettyrose Enjoyed this thought out well. Seems sad of an experience maybe. I like last stanza. So don't shed a tear no more, For me my dear, I'm just glad your OK, So just let the rainbow shine, Where the rivers cannot, not climb. I know what you mean, a lot of feeling and emotion in this poem. julie x

Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi Julie :0 I hope your well has can be. Sorry I have not responded sooner, I try too fast, when people have been kind enough too take the time too read my work. Thank you so much for your kind comments, it means alot too me. And yes your right many hours trying too get this how it should be and still will mess around with it, but like you I love the last stanza. Keep Writing Keep Smiling :) Trish

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