Poem 2016

By Rachel Down

Wed, 04 Jan 2017

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2 comments

Hanabe

Fireworks

Fire flowers

Hormones and doorslams

I love you Mum

RD 2011

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I like this. I reads like a

Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on Thu, 2017-01-05 06:17

I like this. I reads like a window into much more than is written. A finely crafted tip of an iceberg.

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thank you. How right you are

Permalink Submitted by Rachel Down on Thu, 2017-01-05 10:21

thank you. How right you are about this being the tip on an iceberg. It is almost my shortest poem! RD

Rachel Down

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