Lulu Turns the Key
By ralph
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It was the night of the firefly
just after
an awful steaming
Dixie storm
in the once upon a time
American town of
Crystal City
South Texas.
And it’s where we catch Lulu
a late forties strawberry blonde
with a red ribbon in her hair
smoking green home grown
in her beaten up
pink Coupe de Ville
of questionable ownership.
A sight
for sordid eyes
on any given
Sunday.
She's parked
outside a neon Cantina called
'Billy's Super Rib'
that proudly never closes.
Where she’s worked
as a waitress
for seven years now
serving beef and bean burritos
to the soundtrack of tinny
Mexican radio
that annoyingly never ends.
She hasn't much
to declare
just the wet dust
and the sizzled wind.
The boys that
came and went
on motorcycles
Methadone
and mediocrity.
So Lulu flicks the roach
to the porch
and puts the wreck in reverse.
Slams on that old Joni tape
that plays all the way
to Calgary.
Her shimmering
Northern light.
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Love the long sentences that
Love the long sentences that stream through this. It's excellent.
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What a great sense of place
What a great sense of place and character.
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