This is what my Mother said.
By ralph
Sun, 29 Apr 2012
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Of all the wonderful things
my mother said,
her final words meant most.
She was sat in her kitchen.
Stick thin,
cigarette in.
Beautiful.
A touch of Hollywood still.
She only had days left.
She worked it out.
She had to pass it on.
A route for living.
Before the dying.
Her eyes set upon mine,
fierce with love.
She lifted a glass of wine.
Heavy with the years.
Red,
like blood.
‘Go live your life,
try to do everything.
Don’t stop!’
It's two years on now.
Where do I start?
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Hi Ralph, a mother's words
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Ralph,
a mother's words mean so much, especially when they
give good advice like your mum did.
Great work.
Jenny.
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wonderful - loved it. little
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
wonderful - loved it.
little typo - you're missing the apostrophe in the penultimate line
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