Don't commit suicide
By randy-johnson
Mon, 06 Dec 2010
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Don't commit suicide, you can't afford the cost.
If you commit suicide, your soul will be lost.
Your death will bring others nothing but pain and sorrow.
Don't commit suicide, things may improve tomorrow.
Some people lose everything and they become derelict.
They think that suicide is the answer but they're incorrect.
Things can get better and that's no lie.
Don't end it all, I feel your pain as you cry.
If you have a family, they'll be in misery if you're not around.
It will ruin their lives when they see you being lowered into the ground.
I know that you're unhappy and I'm not asking you to dance.
But people do love you so please give life another chance.
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Like your positive thought -
Like your positive thought - and love the last two lines!
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This is good strong poem,
definitely if it can stop
someone,must be a top winner.***
So sad if they do,whatever age.
julie xxx
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