Two-thirty

By Ray Schaufeld

Fri, 09 Sep 2022

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4 comments

Elizabeth Windsor

passed on

at two-thirty

yesterday

at Balmoral.

They say

Balmoral

Was the place

She loved the best.

Most of us

are not royals,

or only of our own

Castle

Domain

Fiefdom

Manor

House or

Place.

The best I can

believe

is that,

in a fair world

When we try our best

to keep

a clean

and honest place

We rule.

Comments

Maybe it is easier for us to

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Fri, 2022-09-09 11:24

Maybe it is easier for us to rule in our little place than to keep honest, and caring for the multitudes of our land in the position she was asked to fill! Rhiannon

It is true, we all have our

Permalink Submitted by David Kirtley on Sat, 2022-09-10 11:18

It is true, we all have our territory or place to rule, and if we do it well we are doing our bit for society! I like your poem!

we rule, only we don't

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Sat, 2022-09-10 11:27

we rule, only we don't (unfortunaetly).

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Rhiannon, David. Celticman

Permalink Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on Sat, 2022-09-10 11:56

Rhiannon, David. Celticman thank you for reading my poem and for your friendly comments. Yes, you are right what matters is that, when we are able to do so, we try to live our lives in a manner that gives us a clear conscience and does good to those within our immediate environment.