It is I

By RubenMiyazaki

Sat, 11 Feb 2012
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4 comments
 

Horns and halos
See these decorations
Adorning my head?
Haha... haha...

One wing a devil
another an angel
a curse and a blessing
all in one body

It is I
The victim of Good and Evil

I am the person
whom you do not want to meet
yet always do

I am always there beside you
don't want me, though

I am your good
I am your bad

I am your best friend
I am your enemy

I am everyone you know
I am your strangest stranger

I am your reflection of sin
Because you have done both Good and Evil

I am human
I am a demon
I am an angel

It is I
The victim of Good and Evil

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Comments

Submitted by scratch on
Thought provoking enigma. I think this is a good first submission redeagle13. Look again at the last line of the fifth stanza, I recommend deleting "to" at the end of the line. Thanks for sharing. By the way; welcome to the site.

 

Submitted by RubenMiyazaki on
I thank you with utmost pleasure... it is also an honor to receive both a comment and a critique from you.

- Reuben M.

Submitted by scratch on
The pleasure is all mine RedEagle13.

 

Submitted by Chastol on
Nice intriguing poem, RedEagle13. I agree with scratch about the end of the fifth stanza. You could either delete "to" or add "be there". But this is only a suggestion.

Chastok

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