The ‘Icecoming’
By Rhiannonw
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Tall-shaders shed each frail
productive sensitive extension,
exposed-extremities
(except those pin-ends
– protected for retention),
red bird-beads decorate (beak-pecks),
and cased dry-snacks for winter dearth;
inside, down-under cosy earth
trumpet-onions – inedible – wait,
chip-shop-tubers,
nightsight-taproots
– orange glow below;
hedges glitter with diamond-lace,
and soon minute crystal-patterns
begin to film the window-pane,
and floating feather-rain
forms soft, milk-counterpane,
a bush-tailed rodent descends, and searches,
hunts out the cache it stashed;
when warmth once more approaches,
from earth the live-spikes poke
and scaled-knobs on the shaders-tall crack open –
to spread the beauty-cloak,
the active-cover over
to green the land again.
[Poetry Monthly: use/invent ‘kennings’]
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nicely down, now autumn
nicely down, now autumn closes its door and we lose the sun. Rain and frost, what we've lost, finds the earth or a form of poetry digest.
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obscure names often speak to
obscure names often speak to us of things that worth remembering.
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Oh it's lovely Rhiannon, what
Oh it's lovely Rhiannon, what a vivid picture of nature. So pleased you had a go.
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