Don’t tell Daddy!

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 10 Mar 2018
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“We’ll tuck them away
in here – don’t say!
Secret! Surprise!
for his special day.”

“Daddy – that drawer
– don’t open it more
– Secrets! Surprise!
nice socks from the store.”

[IP: secrets]

[this is based on a report by my mother of an incident in my (very young) childhood!]

 

Certificate U
Poem
Families
Humour
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Rhiannon,

I like this poem very much.  Its simplicity is part of its appeal.but a lovely childhood memory just the same.

Moya x

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Moya. The IP brought back the memory of being told this tale about myself in very young age, and it seemed nice to share a bit of humour! Rhiannon