Evening Song

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 24 Jun 2017
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11 comments
 

Rich, deep trilling,
chuckles, gurgles twirling,
tickle, thrilling,
short, sharp whistles
mellow whirring,
fluted, languid, stirring
piercing, drilling
through the evening air
invade the ears:
startling, compelling,
invigorate, captivate
the wakened mind that hears.

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

This is a great poem Rhiannon, it reminds me of all the sounds in our neighbour hood.

Very much enjoyed.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny. I am one slow to listen, but that evening, after a hot day, this bird (blackbird, presumably, which has such a variety of repertoire) really 'awakened' me as I went out to do some weeding, and my mind kept trying to describe it in words. The photograph is from the following evening, not so bright, but the singing was still there, though there was some competition from a strong wind blowing! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for the cherries, hope you enjoyed! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

Lovely description of bird song, it really is invigorating isn't it.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jane. Yes, as I said to Jenny, I'm not a good listener, and more attuned to looking at the detail of nature, but was so glad to have my attention caught to the vivid delights and intriguing, strong variety. I remember you wrote encouraging to listen to the delights of birdsong recently.. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

The chatter and song of birds. Beautiful.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Elsie, glad you enjoyed! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Ladylily on

Bursting with energy!  A lovely poem about our friend the 'Black Bird' Beautiful singers. Great discriptive of this nature Spirit. Last line says it all. Thank you for your comment on my lastest poem. Best wishes to you. 

LadyLily

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Geraldine, for reading, and I'm glad you felt the energy of the singing came through in my words! best wishes to you too, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

LOVE this poem :0) I think blackbirds song is the most beautiful sound I have ever heard,  You have described it brilliantly

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, nice to know old songs are investigated and enjoyed! the blackbird's song is quite something isn't it? Good to stop and listen! Rhiannon