Familiarity breeds contempt (IP)
By Rhiannonw
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“What is it?”*, they said – extraordinary food,
collected each morning (and tasting so good)
from the ground all around on six mornings, and then
double provision day six, so day seven
they’d rest, eating what from day six had been kept
(it decayed other nights if retained as they slept).
So supplies must be gathered afresh every day
(but one!) trust their Rescuer’s words, and obey.
When baked from the flour that was ground from these flakes,
it tasted of honey and olive-oil cakes.
This promised provision would be constant throughout
their journey – his will and his skill not in doubt.
But some became irritable, sulky and moaned,
and spoke of variety in the land where they’d groaned
under slavery harsh – they imagined it better,
forgetting their sufferings and prospects so bitter,
stirring up grumbles, provoked discontent,
they scorned all the wonder of what they’d been sent,
dismissed the great rescue and future sure land,
to Moses they made their ungrateful demand,
a mirage of luxury vainly they lusted,
but ‘manna’* sustained them – and many still trusted
their Lord who had saved them, preserving, and fed
with this most extraordinary wonderful bread.
*’manna’ means ‘what is it?’
based on Exodus 16:11-31; Numbers 11:4-6
[IP: How The Extraordinary Became Mundane]
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This is a wonderful poem
This is a wonderful poem Rhiannon. Strong on rhythm and rhyme, I think it works really well. A message in there, too!
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Hello Rhiannon,
Hello Rhiannon,
Another poem where your religious conviction shines through. As you know I am not religious but that doesn't stop me from enjoying your religious poems. There's a serenity about them that I find appealing.
Moya
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I love the way you bring the
I love the way you bring the old tale to life and give 'manna' a texture and taste. You say that the word 'Manna' means 'what is it' so that IMO the tale can also be seen as guidance that we should be thankful and gain satisfaction from straightforward honest goodness and see this as a priority to work towards, as it is luxury enough. I try to practice this in my own life. Elsie
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Rhiannon you are not thick.
Rhiannon you are not thick. IMO is sometimes a short way to say In My Opinion. Another expression I use is AFAIK - meaning As Far As I Know. All the best Elsie
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This poem is manna indeed
This poem is manna indeed Rhiannon, it just flows along like the Red Sea itself! Brilliant!
Linda
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Well done on this one,
Well done on this one, Rhiannon.
You used the IP to its fullest advantage, and created an original and far-reaching poem which got the recognition it so richly deserved.
These lines, for me, stood out in particular:-
"This promised provision would be constant throughout
their journey – his will and his skill not in doubt".
Tina
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