The five doorways
By Rhiannonw
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He shuts his eyes to evil,
he shuts his ears to hear
and yet he fears its touch to harm –
smells, tastes its presence near.
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His fingers quick to grasp a scheme
he knows is crooked, bent;
he doesn’t want to look too hard,
deaf to deceit’s intent.
He doesn’t care that some will taste
disaster through his gain,
and that corruption’s smell will cling,
suspicion will remain.
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But eyes that see and don’t conceal,
good taste to listen well
to truth, and touch that’s sensitive
produce sweet scent to smell!
[IP: use the five senses – sight, hearing, smell, touch and taste]
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A very deft IP response
A very deft IP response Rhiannon
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Well done, Rhiannon. Luigi x
Well done, Rhiannon.
Luigi x
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wonderful rhythm in this one.
wonderful rhythm in this one. Particularly like the second verse
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You got the I P perfectly
You got the I P perfectly with this one Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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