Grimm Fun (Poetry Monthly)
By Rhiannonw
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Gathered tales,
weirdness fantastic,
fictional magic:
golden haired lasses
whose beauty surpasses
all others
(– symbolic
of beauty of spirit?
for they [usually] proved
to be graceful in mind,
and, unlike their guardians,
both gentle and kind):
the hero was snared,
set impossible feat,
then repeat and repeat
of strange tasks to complete
before he could claim his bride’s hand,
gain her riches;
for evil had crookedly planned,
his downfall prepared;
the guardians were devious
in their challenges perilous
to enmesh and to thwart
whoever they’d caught.
The ‘wisdom’ that’s stressed
is, when put to the test,
discerning when help they are needing,
and judging aright
(not by shallow first sight)
dare they trust this odd creature who’s leading?
The venturers ‘clever’
were cocky and never
accepted the guidance when offered.
They thought they knew better
than a tramp in the gutter
or a fox (prince disguised?)
whose words were despised:
full failure, disgrace, shame they suffered.
The trauma, adventures so rotten
are afterwards quickly forgotten
when he finds that he suits her
and she likes this good suitor,
and their lives and their future
seem so normal (unmagical,
not fantastical)
(mostly happy)
thereafter.
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Comments
I used to love fairy tales.
I used to love fairy tales. Guess I still do. No crtical feedback. Poetry is too complex for me to comprehend. But I did enjoy it and it has its own truth and an easy rhythm.
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I thought this was both
I thought this was both captivating and clever. Sometimes I wonder whether I will ever be as good
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
This is a sort of summary of a whole genre of literature - and done in a fun way. I enjoyed reading it.
Jean
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Don't see anything to
Don't see anything to criticize in this. Very witty. Enjoyed.
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Very well done with clever
Very well done with clever rhyming, Rhiannon, and I love the title. It fulfills the brief perfectly.
Verses in rhyme do not seem to be popular on this site but I always enjoy a poem with a bouncy rhythm.
Luigi x
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