Gwaun* valley (Pembrokeshire) in May
By Rhiannonw
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Gwaun* valley quiet, lush, green,
munching sheep by a glittering stream,
bird song and baas
(but very few cars),
narrowing down til the grass has gone,
just fresh-leaved woods
with swathes of ransoms** beside the track
and the tumbling water,
then up through the trees to the road
– steep laneside verge
of grasses and flowers’
May growth surge
– red gleams in its jungle
– can’t stop to untangle
to check what they are
– pimpernel, cranesbill? …
let’s race to the car.
*Gwa-een **wild garlic white star clusters
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wild garlic and countryside
wild garlic and countryside and a pleasure in walks and uncovering words you cannot hide.
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An enchanting poem Rhiannon,
An enchanting poem Rhiannon, I read this out loud to myself in a Welsh accent, it sounded so much like a Dylan Thomas piece of writing.
Really enjoyed and well done; one of my favourites of yours.
Jenny.
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What a pretty picture - wish
What a pretty picture - wish I was there
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Lovely ramble. Thanks for
Lovely ramble. Thanks for sharing it, Rhiannon.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
We do really feel like we are sharing your beautiful countryside with you when you write.
Jean
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