Silence is Night
By Richard L. Provencher
Mon, 02 Jul 2018
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draws you in
once was twilight
now only the black
and no longer bright
just peaceful grace
once was love
with sidewalk space
and now the memory
of your last kiss
brings me back
to the dark
after twilight
(c) 2018 Richard L. Provencher
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This has an interesting
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
This has an interesting format and internal rhyme. The absence of punctuation lets the well chosen words do the talking.
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1 User voted this as great feedback
Such a poetic reply is a
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Such a poetic reply is a bonus. Hope you're both well Richard. Kevin
Parson Thru
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