The Smell
By Richard L. Provencher
Sat, 04 Sep 2021
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The Smell
of animal-like fear from
a thunderous clap
and I shaking and shouting
in ecstasy
pointing to the sky-
its icicle spear
of energy
drawing my attention
from ocean’s shore.
Waves are roiling
leap-frogging
towards a cowering landscape-
wind continues
dancing topsy-turvy
in the afternoon
leaves flee the trees
and birds follow in erratic flight.
Facing a cascade of onrushing
waves I feel it’s time to-
Run,
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An energizing poem that
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An energizing poem that stimulates the senses. Great poem Richard.
Jenny.
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involving description of the
brilliantly involving description of the approach of an exhilarating but uncontrollable force. I hope you are keeping safe!
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