TIDBITS poem
By Richard L. Provencher
Sat, 29 Mar 2008
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Tidbits
When darkness turns
into night, eyes are
without light.
Climb higher, to
tall tree without branches
ridge over yonder hopes to be
part of an eagle’s soar,
travel, eat fresh fish
crows eat scraps, deal
with ridicule,
sun warms feathers
on a moral fable.
From Newfoundland
they came, B-Cers,
Sou’ Westers, Stetsons
and tight jeans
all part of the dance.
© Richard L. Provencher
Website: http://www.amazon.com/Esther-and-Richard-Provencher/e/B00O8K9UKE
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Your poetry is definitely
Your poetry is definitely improving - more show and less tell! It's also escaping from the maudlin and becoming all the more interesting for it. congratulations!
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a unique and entertaining
a unique and entertaining work.
very interesting and a good style of voice
I enjoyed it. well done and congrats on the cherry pick!
Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...
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