Foggy

By samhennig
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The low hum of the electric radiator
and the distant sound of a dogs deep bark
become the silence they break;
so consistent is their presence.
Grey skies descend,
playing on the mossy tiles of the roofs
as though they were piano keys.
Two robins pick amongst the gravel,
unaffected by what might affect them,
concentrated only on what is there.
We pick amongst the gravel,
but we are too aware.
I flick the kettle on and let the sound echo
through the cold, still air. Plumes of vapour
mimicking the fog.
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Wow, there's a lot going on
Wow, there's a lot going on here. Electric Radiator, Dogs deep bark, and then my favoutite. Mossy tiles and piano keys, what a great description and for me, a visualistion. I have mossy tile on my roof! And when it rains it does seem like a tune playing in the sky. Well done. Nice poem...
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