Stuck
By seafret
Thu, 02 Mar 2017
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The sunshine
The water
We dive,
Collide
Don't feel the cold
I want more
A totality of that feeling
Forever
Singularly stuck
To your underwater self
Barnacled
Manacled
In the dream I seek this
In waking I stick to my dream
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Particularly liked the last
Particularly liked the last couple of lines - opens up the poem and and lots of questions about the relationship.
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