Blunt

By seekerofwords

Sun, 22 May 2011

4 comments

sleep ended
by the violent ringing
of my bullying
alarm clock

waking up
has never been
my strong point
whereas dreaming
is my passion

you see
I dislike
the outside world
with its threat
of the unpredictable
and the violent
unknowns

2011(C)Lenny Gazbowski

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Sun, 2011-05-22 08:44

I hope you can enjoy the outside world despite your wariness. I liked this ;)Pia

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sun, 2011-05-22 11:19

I really like this, especially the ending. Beeme xx

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sun, 2011-05-22 12:51

I piece I myself can understand only to well. A great strong poem, that tells the reader, you're not afraid to speak from the heart. Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by seekerofwords on Sun, 2011-05-22 19:47

appreciate your comments and glad the poem was well received. Namaste, Leny

easy on the mayo dude!