Haiku Set 1

By Shannan

Fri, 09 Dec 2016
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Neatly cut flowers

All perfectly designed

Pinned to her gown

 

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Growing from the dust

From seed to plant to flower

Colours that explode

 

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She is at my door

Holding all my characters

My funky hat stand

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Delicate flowers

Holding glorious perfumes

Uplifting powers

 

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Changing the seasons

God displays awesome blessings

With all four turns

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Enjoyed, Shannan, though I hoped verse 3 didn't mean you change your character as you change a hat! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Shannan on

Hmmm... Tough one when I put all the haiku's together as they are all separate and not one poem with 'verses', but 'verse 3' - for reference sake with regards to what I haven't made very clear at all - yes, my character does change like that - I am a different character around my mom, my boss, my sister, my friends - all dependent on the trust levels that are there and the maturity of the person I am engaging with. Although my charatcer changes to protect my stress levels (or as it would be from "The Little Prince" : to meet the needs of those who see an anaconda / a hat) my values, my beliefs and my morals are rock solid across the board with all engagements :) Have a blessed day $

 

Submitted by celticman on

a difficult skill to carry, so much expectation and belief into the last line. well done. 

 

Submitted by Shannan on

I really appreciate your acknowledgement celticman. I trust you are well. $