Absolute Beginner

By shoe

Mon, 08 Mar 2010
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8 comments
 

Take my hand, for I am chaste,
Trace every contour of my face,
Tilt my head and let me taste,
Grace my throat with a pearl necklace.

Certificate 18
Poem
What was I thinking! they sounded so good in my head.
Erotica

Comments

Submitted by kheldar on
Swap necklace for embrace and it will be even more fun lol Seriously though, I wouldn't have the confidence to write 4 lines and let them stand on their own, your own confidence is not misplaced. David xx

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Submitted by shoe on
Hmmm...I chose necklace for it's um connotations, would embrace imply the same thing? I am not well versed in these things, being a naive, innocent country girl! I appeal to your worldly maturity to clarify. confidence? nah, tis just for fun,:~D

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I'll just say leave it as 'necklace' ;) Another wickedly saucy little poem, Shirley! Magic xxx

 

Submitted by shoe on
Thanks Girlfriend!!

 

Submitted by kheldar on
Twas me who was being a country bumpkin, Your sauciness quite took me by suprise :--)

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Submitted by shoe on
in a nice way I hope!:~D

 

Submitted by WillSimpson on
Haha this is filth, I love it.

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Submitted by shoe on
;~}