The Bullfinch (I.P)

By shoe
Sat, 18 Sep 2010
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15 comments
She knew nothing of freedom
or of imprisonment,
but with every frenzied beat
of the Bullfinches wing,
with every glimpse
into his panic stricken eyes;
desperate for a chink, a glimmer of escape,
A part of her too tender
to endure it, died.
Later, with his wings outstretched, as if in supplication
or flying, she buried him.
She did not have the words
at six years old
to say;
that they should have released him,
to explain;
that she did not want another bird.
She knew nothing of the ignorance of adults
or the innocence of children,
She did not have the words.
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" the bite of knowledge"-
" the bite of knowledge"- very clever. Beautiful little poem.
;)
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This is stunning shoe! well
This is stunning shoe! well done on the cherry :)
Beeme xx
k.
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Hi shoe, How sad for the
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi shoe,
How sad for the Bull Finch and the little girl,
how tenderly you tell this poem. Really enjoyed
reading this.
Congratulations on the cherry.
Jenny.
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I really enjoyed this shoe -
I really enjoyed this shoe - congrats on well deserved cherry.
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Congrats on the cherry,
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Congrats on the cherry, shoe! This is brilliant and beautiful.
Final 3 lines bring the poem to a very tender and truthful end. Great stuff :)
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I really like this shoe! K x
I really like this shoe! K x
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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Simple, yet beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Simple, yet beautiful, Shirley! Really well done on the cherry - those last few lines are just gorgeous!
Magic xxx
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Well written and something
Permalink Submitted by peterelbee on
Well written and something close to my own heart. I don't like seeing birds living out their lives in cages, esp. beautiful ones like the bullfinch.
How sad that it died, yet how delightful that it finally found it's freedom.
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A wonderful piece, I cannot
A wonderful piece, I cannot help but think that later in the child in the piece felt similarly caged, experience teaching her the unfortunare words that in innocence she diddn't know.
xx :--)
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Oooh thats a good comment
Oooh thats a good comment shoe, I think agree :) xx K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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new shoe well done on the
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new shoe
well done on the cherry!
beautiful poem. So true though,
definitely wriitng is a great therapy
like you say and singing and dance, any
movemnets.Regardless of age. Back now after couple of big problems all sorted out now and nice and warm.
take care.
julie x
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