The Larks Song
By shoe
Tue, 20 Apr 2010
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How we wantoned ourselves away
on each other,
eagerly gulping down every morsel,
we never even tasted them.
We prised apart our sea urchin hearts
and spoon fed each other the delicate flesh,
licking the salt from our lips.
We spoke of love with larks tongues,
singing the chorus over and over.
Now we find ourselves here,
dry mouthed in the dark, the salt stinging our eyes,
unsated, spent, consumed by love.
And the lark sings her heart out, over and over.
Impotent thunder rumbles, increasingly distant.
Mud cracks in a hundred places and we breathe in dust.
We wait, hungry for the storm to break.
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Wonderful, so eloquent.
Permalink Submitted by Luly Whisper on
Wonderful, so eloquent.
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I think it is mighty fine-
I think it is mighty fine- exactly rich and yes eloquent
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Clever Shirley and a bit
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Clever Shirley and a bit sexy; which can't be bad ;) I liked this a lot
Chris ;)
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An amazing succession of
An amazing succession of images. Love and food is always a good one but I liked particularly the last stanza which takes it well beyond just 'good'.
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These lines just blew me
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
These lines just blew me away:
'We prised apart our sea urchin hearts
and spoon fed each other the delicate flesh,
licking the salt from our lips.'
and
'Mud cracks in a hundred places and we breathe in dust.'
Really well done on this one, Shirley!
Magic xxx
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You take the written word
You take the written word and charge it up with emotional tension. Really well done.
David xx
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