Her Rucksack
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 04 Apr 2011
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32 comments
When we give you this,
we’ll throw in, as well,
Niagara Falls...
the Rocky Mountains
with their shawl
of Bristlecone Pines...
a dozen or so
grazing, Bighorn Sheep.
You may as well have, too,
the Long Son Pagoda –
complete with dragons
breathing fire...
the Sapa Valley
with its crooked seams
of rice fields...
its Sunday night market,
where wide-eyed
kids ran rings around
the English lady
with hair
the colour of straw...
who wanted you
to have this...
to take her places
she never saw.
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This flows so beautifully,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This flows so beautifully, Tina! I love the short-line structure. Well done on the well-deserved cherry :)
Magic xxx
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