Little Bird
By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 28 Apr 2013
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In those, oh...so unsexy, mauve
Wellingtons, with pink polka-dots,
you fall to your knees... hair cascading
down your shoulders...loose tendrils
teasing the ground.
Cupped in your hand – a fledgling
fallen from the nest; frightened eyes
gazing up at yours, and I’d give anything
to be that sparrow, nestled in your palms.
There came down a soft rain, and a scent
of the soil wafted through the window –
the mirabelle tree in whimsical white
and you lowered your head.
I am that silent prayer you proffered
that one day you might choose to love me –
even half as much, as you willed
that little bird to live, to fly...to ride
the orange bow of this earth.
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A lovely image and metaphor
A lovely image and metaphor here Tina. Beautiful in fact.
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this is lovely, and pre
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
this is lovely, and pre edit, really lovely too! Enjoyed x
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You've painted such a tender
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You've painted such a tender moment with words Tina.
Very much enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
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The adoration is so clearly
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The adoration is so clearly depicted in that opening stanza, and the rest paints an entrancing picture, laced with longing. Really beautiful poem, love it.
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