Summer Evenings like These...
By Silver Spun Sand
Fri, 04 Jun 2010
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No power tonight – no
lights, no TV, no radio –
the phone, off its cradle; wafts
through my open window
the chatter of martins, sitting,
gossiping on the wire.
Blithely they dart and dive – skim
the surface of the pond
where golden orfe, mouths
agog, play tag in and out
the lilies – custard cupped.
Snatching a drink, upwards
they fly, ripping the silk
of a Bondi-Blue twilight;
gliding on the wind, splicing
the silence of a soft,
suburban Sunday. Swoop,
dip – dare to rendezvous
mid-flight; as lovers do...perhaps
for a fleeting kiss.
But this is not the time
to philosophise...erase
from my mind, axioms
of Euclid – only to marvel
at the triangularity
of their darkling wings.
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new Silver-Spun-Sand Wow!
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Wow! excellent poem beautiful.
the Author is great.
Blithely they dart and dive- skim
The surface of the pond
where golden orfe, mouths
agog,play tag in and out
the lilies-custard cupped.
I remember the park,the black birds
lined up,lik was it Alf Hitchcoock's film.
eery,seeing about 15 above you
Have a good week-end.
julie xx
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Stunning imagery, such a
Stunning imagery, such a beautiful poem, Tina. one of the best I've read in ages, in my opinion. Love the last lines, you never fail to impress and captivate me with your writing.
Beeme xx
k.
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Admirable stuff Tina. I
Admirable stuff Tina. I really enjoyed this one.
David xxx
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