A Town Like Beverley
By Silver Spun Sand
Thu, 28 Jul 2011
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You were inspired,
you said – you who were
music and harmony...the slow jazz
of a balmy evening;
speedwell petals flutter
and fall on an emerald sward,
like as many blue bruises
as we lay – face-up,
on the midnight grass;
the air held its summer-sweet
breath for us...
and we cupped our ears...
listened for the sound
of falling stars
while Sirius put on
a show for free for us –
flashed its message in code
of green, amber and red
our pockets full
of promises half made
and long-forgotten ‘life or death’
assignations.
This – the leaving behind
of the place you'd outgrown,
and on the horizon it glowed;
an orange ball.
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a gem of images- as someone
a gem of images- as someone pointed out earlier your poems are very visual- well done Tina
;)Pia
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Lovely jewel in your magic
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Lovely jewel in your magic box!
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Hi Tina, I too love this
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Hi Tina,
I too love this poem, especially those lines:-
as we lay - face-up,
on the midnight grass;
the air held its summer-sweet
breath for us...
It conjured up memories of sleeping out in my old
garden, where I used to live, when it was so hot
at night, the grass was tinder dry and I would fall
asleep looking up at the stars, a wonderful experience.
Thankyou for a perfect read before going to bed.
Jenny.
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If i never read another poem
If i never read another poem again I could live my life a happy chappy :-) - this for me (pardon the cliche) is the sort of poetry that makes my heart sing. Absolutely wonderful. Nice one Tina :-)
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That final line "This –
That final line
"This – the leaving behind
of the place you'd outgrown,..."
pulls everything nicely into focus and holds a promise of even better things to come.
barryj1
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