Last Drops of Elixir

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Fri, 09 Sep 2016
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15 comments
 

Summer's

Allure

becoming

sparse,

our

daily

spoonful

of

elixir

slowly

dwindles

to

welcome

a

Winter Moon,

 

soon

amber glow

of fires

will

snake

through

dark

of night,

 

once more

twigs

will

crackle

as

September's

warm

kisses

are not

lost,

but put

to rest

maintaining

a shelter

for the

weary.

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

The shape of your poem looks like a reminder of the dwindling of summer, and leads into the cosiness of crackling twigs and the indoor warmth of winter rest. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

What a lovely, poem and so on the nail:) missed reading your brilliant work, like many and this is one very pleasurable poem's to come back to. Love how you set this out, I may copy, if I may ha ha.

 

Loved it :)

 

Take care

And Keep Smiling :)

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by TonyC25 on

Beautiful brilliant evocative nature write 

 

Submitted by celticman on

us weary souls watch nature dim, pull the curtains and stay in. 

 

Submitted by jeand on

HI Jenny

I too like this little skinny poem, full of visual effects and memories.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

glad you got the feeling of this poem and many thanks for letting me know, much appreciated.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Trish,

I love that you enjoyed reading this poem and feel honoured that you would want to take a copy.

Hope all is well with you, and many thanks for reading and letting me know.

Jenny. xxx smiley

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Tony,

such kind words give me such a lift. Many thanks for reading and letting me know.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jack,

you are so right in what you say. It's always nice to feel the warmth of our homes, as the season changes.

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jean,

glad you could feel the visual effects of this poem, it gave me so much pleasure to write and play around with.

Many thanks for reading and appreciate your comment.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

It was such an uplifting surprise to recieve cherries for this poem.

Thank you so much Editors.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

Really pretty, has a sense of Pagan rites about it.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Vera,

it's great to hear from you. What a compliment!  Your words are so appreciated.

Thank you.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by hilary west on

Hi,

It was nice to read this poem as we get into September and I felt quite uplifted by its promise. Hot day yesterday turned very misty today for me and now it is more like the fogs of winter this evening!

HW  cool

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi again Hilary,

It does seem we are having an Indian Summer one minute and then that Autumn feeling comes upon us the next. I'm looking forward to Autumn, one of my favourite times of the year and I do enjoy snuggling under the quilt on dark nights.

That you felt uplifted by this poem makes it all the more worth while writing.

Many thanks for reading and letting me know.

Jenny.  smiley  It's nice to be warm, but it's also nice to be cool. cool