Rousing Spring

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Mon, 04 Mar 2024
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19 comments
 

Beneath swollen drifting clouds,

Swift new season breathes creation;

Energies balanced – feathers quivering,

Springs growing throng of tiny beaks

Sustenance yearning.

 

Earth yields its own in silence

Among tangled harmony,

Developing, green shoots not idle;

But with hush intent,

Stirring drowsy winter's soil.

 

 

Pixabay free image.

 

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Very lovely Jenny - and I saw you commented elsewhere that you're in the middle of writing one of your brilliant long stories - really looking forward to itQ

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Many thanks for your kind words insert. They mean a lot. 

My story is still very much a work in progress but keeps me busy when I have some spare time to write. I'm very grateful for your thoughful words of encouragement.

Thank you again.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Evokes the quiet bustle and calm of spring's activity developing.  Thank you. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

as soon as I read the I P for this week, I couldn't resist putting pen to paper and sharing my thoughts.

I'm glad I could evoke the activity of spring developing. I've even noticed some bees starting to appear, which is always nice to see.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Turlough on

Rousing is the perfect word for this time of year.

Nice one Jenny! You made me want to sing.

Turlough

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Turlough,

well the birds in the garden are chirruping in chorus, so pleasee sing your heart out. smiley 

I'm glad you liked the word rousing, it felt right to me too.

Your friendly thoughts are always very welcome.

Many thanks.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Gorgeous, Jenny. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

It's lovely to hear from you Rachel. Reading your impression was very rewarding, coming from someone who has achieved so much.

Thank you for taking the time to read and share your impression. I'm very grateful.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by celticman on

lovely pic, makes your heart sing, as your words do too. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Ah! I'm glad you liked the pic and my words Jack. Singing from the heart is a lovely way to describe your feelings.

I'm grateful for your thoughts.

Thank you.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Editors, it's always exciting to be acknowledged for a piece of writing, which is why I'm so appreciative of those lovely cherries.

Thank you so much.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

"... in silence

Among tangled harmony"

This is WONDERFUL! I love your descriptions of your happy garden :0)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hello Di,

thank you for your kind words of support. Much appreciated.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Spring awakens in your lovey words Jenny. Beautiful poetry:smiley

"Developing, green shoots not idle; But with hush intent, Stirring drowsy winter's soil."

Penny4athought

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

So glad this poem worked for you Penny. Thank you so much for letting me know.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by marandina on

"But with hush intent,

Stirring drowsy winter's soil."

 

That's an evocative vignette, Jenny.

 

So happy to see you writing regularly again. Paul :)

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Sorry I'v taken a while to read your comment Paul, things are a bit hectic around here. Grateful for your words, I'm not sure about writing regularly at the moment, we;re quite busy.

But thank you so much for your encouragement.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by D G Moody on

What a nice accompaniment to today's Spring weather; I love your use of imagery Jennifer. 

Dougie Moody

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Dougie,

knowing that my use of imagery worked for you, is a real compliment.

Many thanks for reading and sharing your kind thoughts.

Jenny. smiley