Under Late Spring Sky
By skinner_jennifer
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Dear diary...although my
attempt to create a patch
of meadow didn't go to plan,
I will hope to try again next year.
These are my thoughts in a
poem.
My meditations at this
present moment are not
in wild woods or where
drowsy meadows are
graced with flowers,
for now affection leads
me within our garden
mantle of green; where
insects on wings hover
among grasses.
I gaze then with lighter
thoughts at shelter,
where under canopy of
trees we nestled from sun
and rain; realize visible
failure of blooms was
just a blithe oversight.
I attempt to imagine...
perhaps next year with
more careful planning,
nature's fine colours will
enhance these desires
outpouring
carried by buzz of bees,
their daily labours flit in
ecstasy...till overflowing
they return to hive
coated in sweetness
under late spring sky.
Photo is my own.
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Beautiful.
Beautiful.
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"..carried by buzz of bees
"..carried by buzz of bees
their daily labours flit in ecstacy.."
Another beautiful diary entry if a little sad. And a lovely pic. Paul :)
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It seems you have something
It seems you have something to watch anyway, and sounds restful. The differences in what flowers well each year seems rather unpredicatable, maybe timing of weather changes, or what gets going well first. Rhiannon
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I am sorry it didn't work out
I am sorry it didn't work out this year. My flowerbed was not so good, either. As Rhiannon says, weather is maybe the cause, though wildflowers do not like to be told what to do I have found :0) So, when they DO flower it is even more special!
However, I loved how your poem is not about disappointment, rather embraces what Nature HAS given you, all its beauties. Really enjoyed, both for the images, and the wisdom
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how terrifying! I would have
how terrifying! I would have been the same! (interesting how the bees stopped buzzing before you heard it, maybe they felt the vibrations do you think?) There is such a wrongness about sounds like that, as if they are tearing something that will never quite heal. I feel so much for birds and animals that live near where they launch rockets in America - on the radio it said one of the sites is near a wild bird sanctuary. I am sure you send out a warmth and peace and welcome to all your wild visitors. I like taking a book out, with Tina, too, but always end up watching birds and insects or clouds instead :0)
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Being lyrical about Nature
Being lyrical about Nature has become your trademark, Jenny. This poem is amongst your best. Well done.
Luigi xx
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There's nothing quite like a
There's nothing quite like a meadow as a place to lose yourself. We have more meadow than Julie Andrews had in The Sound of Music. We'll gladly lend you a bit of it.
These words stood out for me...
I attempt to imagine...
perhaps next year with
more careful planning
They're words that go through my mind all the time. And this is what gardens are all about. Never giving up and trying something different next time to meet the demands of your imagination. Trying to fit in with nature when nature usually wants to go off and do its own thing. I tell people that I love my garden because it's a place I can go where I don't have to think. Perhaps I'm lying, as my mind works overtime planning and imagining how things will look next year.
I can tell from your words just how much you enjoy your garden. A lovely poem and I'm sure it's a lovely garden.
Turlough
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you've a creative eye, under
you've a creative eye, under the spring sky, jenny.
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Very big congratulations
Very big congratulations Jenny - what a beautiful poem! I'm sorry the Red Arrows made you jump. I live near a US airbase and there are often unwelcome surprises like that (some so big you wonder how they stay in the air!). I bet next year your meadow is just as you want it to be
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