Visual Paradise

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 22 Aug 2013

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39 comments

3 likes

Consider waking

to the sound

of the rustling

leaves...whispering

on a gentle breeze,

staring out across

perfumed fields,

as fresh zephyr

rouses purple

headed lavender,

beyond...rugged

paths lead down

to the bracing ocean,

a far cry from the

busy urban jungle

that is my reality,

so I sit and muse,

bringing to life a

sweet paradise,

I can only visualize

in my wildest dreams.

Certificate U

Poem

Spiritual

Comments

Hi there Parson Thru, glad I

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Mon, 2013-09-02 14:02

Hi there Parson Thru, glad I could take you to my visual paradise. Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts...much appreciated. Jenny.

Hi Jenny, wonderful to see

Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Fri, 2013-09-06 16:04

Hi Jenny, wonderful to see you are still creating magic with words... I too visualse wonderful places away from all the electric light... Here's to it being reality one day. Keep well. Shannan

Hi Shannan, over the moon

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sat, 2013-09-07 09:59

Hi Shannan, over the moon with your comment, really nice to turn on to abc tales and see this morning. Yes I totally agree with you, it would be beautiful if one day this paradise was a reality, will just have to keeping hoping. Thanks for stopping by and reading, much appreciated. Jenny.

Yay for that :-) We'll have

Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Thu, 2013-09-12 12:24

Yay for that :-) We'll have to make sure we make it happen for ourselves ;-) My pleasure lovely lady.

Dream on

Hi Shannon, I'm so sorry I

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Mon, 2013-09-16 13:20

Hi Shannon, I'm so sorry I've taken so long to reply to your great comment, only I've not been on a computer for over a week. I just want to say thank you so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts. Thanks again. Jenny.

That's quite alright Jenny,

Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Sun, 2013-09-29 13:27

That's quite alright Jenny, my pleasure, I'm on these computers far less than everyone on this site ;-) Keep putting out your fantastic work. Have a great week.

Thanks so much Shannon. Big

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Mon, 2013-09-30 14:24

Thanks so much Shannon. Big smiles from me. Jenny.

Hi Jenny. Nothing I can add

Permalink Submitted by The royster on Thu, 2013-10-03 11:24

Hi Jenny. Nothing I can add to the above comments apart from how much I enjoyed it as with all your poems. Roy

Hi Roy, funnily enough I was

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Thu, 2013-10-03 11:45

Hi Roy, funnily enough I was cutting back the lavendar in my garden yesterday, this poem sprang to mind as I worked, the fragrance was so amazing, I closed my eyes and could see the fields. Any way so pleased you enjoyed and thank you so much for letting me know, always appreciated. Jenny.