Watching
By skinner_jennifer
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My eyes follow you into rain
feeling dry earth becoming moist,
growth echoing below meadow sweet
pulsing daisies and buttercups to rise,
flutter leaf-wing on blooms of flowers,
heat of day...vernal breezes soon passing;
golden sun warms your endearing charm
as you siphon sweet fragrant treasures within,
pollen of desire you soon succumb;
exploring like nymphs beneath branches,
you spread your fancy, let us see your charm
comparable to peacocks displaying feathers;
those wings of holly blue, orange tip and scarlet
akin to red sky rising at dawn, what an utter delight;
you have no burning ambitions or need for acceptance,
time is short in transformation from pupa to bohemian,
Yet! When I watch tranquility you posses in this garden,
I'm reminded of these short lived moments of pleasure,
when on a bright sunny day, my breath is taken away by
inner contentment of living with diverse mother nature.
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This is very pretty, Jenny,
This is very pretty, Jenny, has hints of the romance of nature about it too which is lovely. Like 'vernal breezes' - they definitely seem to have disappeared now! Rachel :)
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'time is short in
'time is short in transformation from pupa to bohemian' is such a good line - saw one the other day, similar to the one in your pic. Amazing. Lovely read.
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I love to watch butterflies
I love to watch butterflies in the garden, they are magical and your've captured their essence in your poem. It was lovely to read.
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It is indeed a great pleasure
It is indeed a great pleasure to watch the graceful fluttering of colourful butterflies, Jenny. Your enjoyable poem reflects perfectly the scene and the resemblance to peacocks displaying their feathers utterly accurate.
Luigi xx
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This is beautiful, Jenny.
This is beautiful, Jenny. Butterflies are wonderful, part of this magnificent creation we call Nature.
Hilary
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