Wisdom Of Her Spirit
By skinner_jennifer
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How softly moved this woman's resilience,
not even that intense flaming sphere
extinguished her desire for knowledge –
drifting from one station to another,
hungering for that destination,
market towns with their beehive
of buzzing sounds touching all
senses, a cacophony nirvana to some;
but not to a nomad who wanders mountain serenity,
bedding down at twilight under a golden saffron sky,
It's cold, barren, independent, rebellious nature defiant
that only the tolerance of these people shall survive,
then, castaway in cankerous heat and cold of desert,
an orgy of windstorms battle golden sea of sand,
it was as if the devil himself would lure man into this
desolate environment, beautiful and alluring as it is.
Night cloaks; gilding sequins of stars,
snakes skim their way as mottled
lizards scurry searching darkness
for that tasty morsel.
Consumed at every turn –
never floundering, time shifts
as glistening jewels of sunlight lead her on,
where salt and gold are plentiful, a trail of clues to follow.
Across river deep and wide,
treasures unloaded from barges;
many trade here, a place for
buying and selling, then onto another post.
Finally many miles reported she reaches her antiquity,
an arresting sight to behold,
locals give welcome.
Her knowledge astounds me,
with eagerness I observed.
A poem inspired by Alice Morrison's trek
Morocco to Timbuktu, shown on BBC 2.
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she reaches her antiquity.
she reaches her antiquity. nice one jenny. know how she feels.
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You draw in the many varied
You draw in the many varied scenes of such a journey, and the varied moods of the desert. I liked the picture conveyed in 'Night cloaks; gilding sequins of stars' They must be so bright away from all the artificial light pollution here.
Was the antiquity Timbuctoo? Rhiannon
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Colourful, powerful, works on
Colourful, powerful, works on more than one level.
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Hi Jenny
Hi Jenny
Very dramatic and visual - your poem. I really like it.
Jean
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Truly Amazing!
Oh my! Each of your poems is work of art, the way you write is an artform. I feel like each piece could be adapted into a beautiful painting or a powerfully moving theatre piece.You truly are an artist that paints pictures with words, the title alone is a masterpiece!
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