I wish I was a Butterfly

By Savx

Thu, 17 Nov 2011
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8 comments
 

I wish I was a puffin
So no worry ‘bout my sin;
I wish I was a bird
So about the world I’d learn;
I wish I was a crane
So I could fly through rain;
and
I wish I was a butterfly,
But it’s only a dream
upon the sky.

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Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by Anne Shirley on
Lovely.

Submitted by Leander42 on
Short sharp poems are my favourite and so is this one. 'Wish I was a puffin...' Beautifully quirky opener.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there slirpie125, This is such a beautiful little poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Thankyou for sharing. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Savx on
Thank you, Anne Shirley, much appreciated! Savannah

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Submitted by Savx on
Wow, thanks, I didn't know something of mine would ever be someone's favorite! Thank you! Savannah

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Submitted by Savx on
No thank YOU Jennifer, for posting THAT! And I'm glad that you enjoyed it =) Savannah

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Submitted by lavadis on
Nice poem

 

Submitted by Savx on
Thanks =) Savannah

Sav