That Day

By smokejack

Tue, 12 Aug 2014
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I remember when we

Laid on that perfectly cut grass

Lying in the crucifix position

Trying to count all the stars

In that midnight sky deep blue

We found a flag

That I waved to celebrate you

 

Our beautiful peace was disturbed

By an irate golf course groundsman

With a torch and a dog in tow

Who bellowed this is private land

I laughed and took hold of your hand

We ran off into the woods

It was my fault for leading you astray

 

How we loved each other that day.

 

©JMcN 2014

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Submitted by jolono on

This made me smile.

 

Submitted by Mermaid in a Gown on

I think this is beautiful. very free and young

 

Submitted by smokejack on

Hello Jolono and Mermaid, thank you both for taking time out to read this piece. I really appreciate your kind words and glad it made you both smile. The world needs more smiles!!

Jack