With These Hands

By smokejack
Fri, 14 Aug 2009
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With These Hands
We laughed about the notion
Of me checking her breasts
For signs of darkness
I prepared myself for the work ahead
She smiled when I said
A strip search is necessary
As is the wine and a bath
And candles
Using massage oil to ensure a thorough search
And relaxation techniques as practiced by acrobats
I investigated the left and then the right
I used to search all through the night
I would cover every blade of grass
And kiss a clear path
All the way to her mouth
Whispering ‘the search resumes tomorrow’
The fear, like love, never goes away.
©SJ2009
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Comments
Wow. This is wonderful,
Wow.
This is wonderful, smokejack. Great to achieve such a romantic and tender poem from such a terrifing procedure - a well deserved cherry.
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I agree; this is really
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
I agree; this is really good. Unusual and entertaining, which is a plus in anyone's book; well done.
Chris ;)
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Beautiful, atb Lena
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Beautiful, atb Lena
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New smokejack Congrats;on
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New smokejack
Congrats;on the cherry
Brilliant way you have
got it all put to-gether.
it's full of suspense and
love.beautiful.
well done.
julie cavalcader (:-
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