Bandersnatch
By sonora
Fri, 16 Nov 2012
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8 comments
Beware the usurer my girl,
who lends to see your lips unfurl
and softly, slowly, validate
the body as his interest rate.
Avoid the flatterer my lass:
grinning, cocksure, bold as brass;
but brass won’t pay the surgeon’s bill,
and gold will buy a bitter pill.
Then love the laughing boy my child,
go dancing with him through the wild,
where ecstasy and perfumed sweat
will grant a gift, not claim a debt.
For kisses laid upon the womb
are sweeter than a lonely tomb.
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Highhat lovely- last two
Highhat
lovely- last two lines especially but the whole poem is brilliant. Had to look Bandersnatch up- wonderful..
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I like this a lot, sonora.
Permalink Submitted by The Walrus on
I like this a lot, sonora. The language is delightful, it's well thought through and I could read it over and over again.
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This was one of the standout
Permalink Submitted by alex_tomlin on
This was one of the standout poems of a great bunch. Top stuff.
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I second/third and fourth
I second/third and fourth the above comments, although I will have to read this a few times to fully get to grips with it (as with any good writing) I definitely think it was worth the cherries!
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