I just can't word it

By Sophie-Stokes

Tue, 31 Aug 2010
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Its a bit odd, this feeling,
It sort of rattles inside my ribcage,
Jiggles in my belly.
Every time hear your voice
or see your smile,
I cant help but feel;
Delighted
Uplifted
Ultimately Absolutely Spectacular.
It's like every part of me
is embraced with a warm hug.
I feel a little funny
but I don't want this to end.
It's nice to have a little jump and spring inside
when I know that you're about.

Certificate U
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by celticman on
Nice. I like it.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Sophie-Stokes, Love this poem, because this is the way I feel when I am around my partner, even after 13 years I still get those butterflies fluttering around inside. I love the words you use, like jiggles in my belly. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Sophie-Stokes on
Wow, Thanks guys :) I wasn't expecting such positive feedback!!! It's very encouraging, Thank you :) Sophie.