The Kiss

By staticshakedown

Mon, 11 Jul 2011

5 comments

the kiss was light
like spring air—!

only the arc of our lips
grazed,
touched,
fanned,
frisked,
stippled,
skimmed,
nipped,
nicked,
pawed at,
shook hands with
each other

like two eyelashes
meeting at a blink—!

And, yeah!
I don’t know what else to say...
Who cares?
It was nice.

Permalink Submitted by fatboy74 on Tue, 2011-07-12 10:10

Love this.

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Tue, 2011-07-12 10:17

Yes really good

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Tue, 2011-07-12 20:25

brilliant--and the ending is just lovely~! cheers, jose hernandez diaz.

Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on Wed, 2011-07-13 07:53

I found this amusing and enjoyed reading! Nice, as a kiss should be.

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Wed, 2011-07-13 15:47

new cavalderl julie Very nice, and much enjoyed. Oh! forgot well deserved cherry!