Snowfall

Brilliant! I especially liked the last stanza, the imagery is great with the 'slips off a sleeve'. The syntax of the poem is perfect too. The nice short lines conveys the snowfall very effectively. Thanks! Stephen.

new Steve Button Well

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Tue, 2012-02-07 16:07

new Steve Button Well written. Sounds a good crispy crunchy day! Look very nice! But when comes of the roof quite scary! thump? Lovely poem. Like the line. Just the whispered Crystal tumble of snow fall. Oh! congrats: on the cherries! julie x

Always great to read your

Permalink Submitted by fatboy74 on Wed, 2012-02-08 17:20

Always great to read your poems Steve - Artifice is still one of my favourites on here. :-)

thanks for reading and

Permalink Submitted by Steve Button on Wed, 2012-02-08 17:42

thanks for reading and commenting cavacaderi and fatboy!!!! glad you liked it

This is how poetry should be

Permalink Submitted by shyrewode on Sun, 2012-02-12 18:41

This is how poetry should be written!

wow! Thank you

Permalink Submitted by Steve Button on Sun, 2012-02-12 18:42

wow! Thank you shyrewode!!!!!

Snowfall

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Nice and crisp and even....

Ha ha, thanks Steve

Oh! this is so, so good,

Thank you! I was happy just

Beautiful, this,

Thank you Tina - it was a

Brilliant! I especially

new Steve Button Well

Always great to read your

thanks for reading and

This is how poetry should be

wow! Thank you

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