Wolfman
By Steve Button
Sat, 21 Aug 2010
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had the old musty smell of damp fur
as he prowled the shopping precinct,
nosing in waste bins for scraps
of some lost life
or leftovers to build a future,
circling round the shoppers
in thick black overcoat
that seemed like skin
rubbed raw by the years
and sleeping rough.
Once I bought him a drink
and he crushed my hand
in his callused black paw,
a fiery light burned briefly
behind his eyes
then gutted
and he released me.
Enough said.
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I quite like this though I'm
I quite like this though I'm not sure why the line breaks occur where they do.
I think the beginning, uncapitalised, is interesting. It does give the impression of coming to the poem sometime after the story had already started. Did you intend that?
'Gutted'? Did you mean 'guttered'? I thought perhaps you did as it's presumably relating to 'fiery light'.
Helvigo Jenkins
Helvigo Jenkins
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