Driving through cloud towards Capel-y-ffin
By stevepoet
Tue, 19 Mar 2013
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I am driving
into the
mist and
sky
with the windows
open. I
am touched,
drenched,
wet with beauty,
dripping song.
The air
hangs,
deep and alive
with rain. My
tiny
voice
throws itself to
the day and
the road
climbs.
This small, perfect
moment lacks
only
you.
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This I think is very good.
This I think is very good. Especially the second and third stanzasz. Well done.
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Enjoyed this steve. "My tiny
Enjoyed this steve. "My tiny voice throws itself to the day and the road climbs," Great line.
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And to me it brings back
And to me it brings back that road, too! and the solatariness that is (sometimes) enjoyed in mist. Rhiannon
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