Ashes

By swindonwoody

Thu, 28 Jul 2011
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i spead your ashes
here today
i come to say
goodbye to you
today

the person i love
i can not hold
i just got this
jar
that holds
the ash of you
it's not you
but yet it is
in the jar is
you

people are
around me
crying
never
ending tears
oh everyone
miss you
but they can only guest
how i feel
inside
in two

its time to let you go here
and to take
off the lid
and gently
let you go
the wind blow
your gently in the air
and your joing the clouds
up there
bits of you are in
the flowers
and on the water
i see you foat away

good bye
now and forever
no grave will have of you
just this meadow
by the water
that where
i come
and sit
and remember
you my love

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Swinwoody This is beautiffuly sad done so well. Made me scribble down, no dark hole do I want to go in, or burn't up. Just set me free like the birds, or butterflies, and dance and sing all wear bright colours no black,Jazz band and children in fancy dress. Scatter mine,by the stream of Mermaids on a glorious sunny day, trumpets and dance to there hearts delight kiss and hug goodbye! cavalcaderl julie xx

Submitted by swindonwoody on
thank you for your kind words. i was not sure of the subject. but then i was thinking why not people enver talk about the act. and it can be a peacful way to say goodbye. for those who wish it that way. thankyou once again maggie

maggie