Sweet Butterfly
By loquaciousicity
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Sweet Butterfly, with wings now dry 'tis time to break away
and light upon the leaves of dawn while weeping willows sway,
not reminisce 'bout chrysalis discarded yesterday,
but treasure life, with colors rife in nature's cabaret.
Sweet Butterfly, you sometimes sigh "terrene so strange and new”,
but take a chance, with winged expanse of fairy-like bijou,
to taste delight in random flight, to drift beyond the blue
and then collect her naked nectar, sipped in morning dew.
Sweet Butterfly, you question why the breeze is seldom soft
when swirling you, your wings askew, while floating free aloft.
Some seem to find their peace of mind believing gods have coughed,
but others, downed, have often found more freedom when they've scoffed.
Sweet Butterfly, you needn't cry, the fields are full of clover,
and meadowlands bare braided strands that winds in waves flow over -
but if you fear that, more than here, another mead is mauver,
just flutter by, beneath the sky, unfettered flitting rover.
Sweet Butterfly, farewell, goodbye, you've left this world behind.
I oft gaze back along the track of flowers that you've mined
recalling days of light sashays and movements unconfined
that complement the firmament where beauty lies enshrined.
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Wow!
It's not often that a 'traditional' poem actually keeps to rhyme and metre - but this does and I am impressed. There are some wonderful lines in there too - 'meadowlands of braided strands in winds and waves that wove her' , for example. This must have taken some time!
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Lines and rhymes as light as
Lines and rhymes as light as the subject you've chosen. It's lovely.
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Seems some lurking metaphoric
Seems some lurking metaphoric thoughts here, Terry.
I particularly liked the 'not reminisce 'bout chrysalis discarded yesterday,
but treasure life, with colors rife in nature's cabaret'
and the memories of her: 'We now look back along the track of flowers that you've mined recalling days of light sashays and movements unconfined that complement the firmament where beauty lies enshrined.'
Rhiannon
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