Love’s Grief
By threeleafshamrock
Sat, 08 Aug 2009
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Would that I could rise on wings of grace
to soar toward the mountains of our past,
once there, alight and look upon your face
and hold the hands of time to lock them fast.
I would gently trace the contours of your lips,
still sanguine; tinged with luster, full with life
and lie within the valley of your hips;
abandoning all hopelessness and strife.
But with wings furled and grace a stranger here;
the mountains sought, all lost in shrouded mist.
I stumble; cold, bereft of hope or cheer,
for bloodless husks cannot return a kiss.
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But with wings furled and
But with wings furled and grace a stranger here;
the mountains sought all lost in shrouded mist.
I stumble; cold, bereft of hope or cheer,
for bloodless husks cannot return a kiss.
Felt a cold chill down my spine when I read that verse.
Short yet so emotive, good work.
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I agree, that last stanza
I agree, that last stanza was darkly powerful, especially liked the bloodless husk!
Your poems have a broad reach, well done.
Did notice you made too and too when you possibly meant to and to in the first stanza.
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Karen
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Such a brilliant poem Chris,
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Such a brilliant poem Chris, even though there's despair the beauty still lingers! Impossible to pick out my favourite lines ;)
Magic xxx
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Hi Chris, This is
Hi Chris,
This is beautiful.Full of every kind of strong
emotion.
Thanks for your comments on my children's stories.
Jacqueline
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